Aet Lindling

Ahahah, what a story Mark.

Ahahah, what a story Mark.

If she's writing a poem like this, I think it just may be a safe bet that she's already heard things like "I do have to tell you, however, that ...

Again you seem to be assuming I know very little about poetry, and also seem to not have actually read the review, in which I never mention any grammatical errors. ...

Of course poems are meant to be felt, not read, with few exceptions. That would be the problem here. As I stated in my review, this isn't a very poetic ...

Ok this was good but you could make it less bad ok i liked aetball i hope he comes back please fix the bad parts do more of the good ...

This is turly touching and beautiferous. Fafnir is a lucky woman to have you.

Record set for shortest sex scene: One sentence. Your body begins to relax as all the crimson tension flows forth. This day shall live in history.

Me, obviously. Edit: Ok, I've been posting too much non-critique stuff on this. Placeholder for review or summat here.

Ripoff of Galerius.

Hey, it's ok. Like I said, you obviously didn't do it intentionally, and you fixed it besides which. I honestly don't hold any hard feelings, even when I was writing ...

This is incredible, where on earth is the next part? Need more.

You two people are complete idiots, the world does not rotate around a horrible book about an abusive relationship that is treated as wonderful. Hopefully this post isn't long enough ...

This isn't a piece, it's a blog, as you said. Thusly, you should create a blog and post this in it, not post it as a non-fiction piece in the ...

"break ur neck" "Non of ur business" Um. Cute. Devils are toootally going to be talking like that. This needs a large amount of proofreading and grammar/spelling fixing.